tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-489081786433198045.post8927514441088065550..comments2023-10-09T13:17:08.094-04:00Comments on Tell me a story: Writers group challengeScott Blanchardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15991159243837923110noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-489081786433198045.post-77100916268370133972007-05-31T13:46:00.000-04:002007-05-31T13:46:00.000-04:00Ah, that's a great one Joan!Ah, that's a great one Joan!Jen Vogelsonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16235800705953167901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-489081786433198045.post-6196594885733614692007-05-24T22:26:00.000-04:002007-05-24T22:26:00.000-04:00She held her life in her own hands as if it were a...She held her life in her own hands as if it were a soggy, crumpled-up tissue. She didn't even want to get close enough to throw it away.Joan Conciliohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09042037521306574698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-489081786433198045.post-62003757772788441482007-05-17T18:49:00.000-04:002007-05-17T18:49:00.000-04:00The oars on the boat rowed as if directing a symph...The oars on the boat rowed as if directing a symphony.<BR/><BR/>She held her life in her own hands as if were an egg balanced at the end of a toothpick.<BR/><BR/>Love is to open sky like loathing is to being buried alive.Susan Jenningshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04715429530097687393noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-489081786433198045.post-3223862380624728902007-05-17T11:00:00.000-04:002007-05-17T11:00:00.000-04:00The dice rolled out of the cup toward Veronica lik...The dice rolled out of the cup toward Veronica like the severed heads of two who had displeased the Queen.<BR/><BR/>Two out, bases loaded, one run down -- it is like muscles stretched taut over bone.<BR/><BR/>If I should wake before I die, I hope I catch the look on the doctor's face.Scott Blanchardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15991159243837923110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-489081786433198045.post-84867769046297916792007-05-16T22:31:00.000-04:002007-05-16T22:31:00.000-04:00A child in... bed... is like... a butterfly in it...A child in... bed... is like... a butterfly in its cocoon.<BR/><BR/>The security guard walks the lobby as if... he's guarding the Hope diamond.<BR/><BR/>Up is like down when...you're going off your medication.<BR/><BR/>The oars on the boat rowed as if pulling taffy.Jen Vogelsonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16235800705953167901noreply@blogger.com