Dedicated to creative thinking, deep reporting, great writing and asking: What happened next?
Saturday, September 19, 2009
Storytelling in a headline
Police: Driver hit cars for blocks
Then she kicked an officer in the groin.
The word 'then' makes this feel like a two-sentence story by making the action a sequence of events. It answers the unstated (but felt in a reader's mind) question, 'then what happened?' And that makes it pleasing to read -- more so than if, say, the readout had been 'She also kicked an officer in the groin.' That would have made it feel a bit more like a list.
Can we do more of this kind of headline storytelling?
*Jess says it's Matt Negrin, the second-newest addition to the desk. Nice work, Matt.
Saturday, July 18, 2009
Congrats, AASFE winners
and for those of you who didn't know, melissa burke placed second in the religion news association's national Cassel's competition. this is the second consecutive year she has won this coveted award.
congratulations to everyone."
And from me: That would be the American Association of Sunday and Feature Editors. I second Buffy's congratulations, and recommend that you check out the winning entries here. Jen won for "Three sisters, five angels," about the aftermath of a fire in which several members of a family were killed.
I need help from Buffy or Mike about which Argento columns were entered. And from Buffy or Sue about which of Sue's headline(s) was/were entered. I'll post them here as soon as I can.